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A Discussion on Love
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What is love, really? How can it be defined; and, on that note, who has the role of defining it? Is it real? If so, what is real? These are all questions that logically follow in asking the question, “What is love?”
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Plato, one of the most infamous philosophers of all time, collected and reiterated the opinions on love of six ancient philosophical icons that discussed the subject sometime between 406 and 400 B.C. In Plato’s collection, titled Symposium, the definition of love is eventually expressed by Socrates, he who seen to be more than a normal human, he who is divine in the flesh. Though the story is written by Plato and likely altered slightly according to his personal prospective on love, the essence of Socrates’ opinion is captured and expressed in the Symposium, Plato’s poetic masterpiece.
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Socrates’ beliefs in love are said to be formulated from a discussion he once had with Diotima, an extremely wise and philosophical woman of Mantinea who served as a tutor to Socrates. He begins his reasoning in stating that prior to discussing love with Diotima, he believed, “that love is a great god and that he belongs to beautiful things”
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(45). What he shortly came to find in his enlightening discussion was that love was actually neither beautiful nor good; that, at its origin, love was poor and homeless. According to Socrates, love is the child of Poros, meaning resource, and Penia, meaning poverty. Additionally, “Love is never completely without resources, nor is he ever rich” (49). Socrates believes that love falls somewhere in between wisdom and ignorance as well because of the fact that love is in love with what is beautiful, and wisdom is one of the finest beauties. This can also be proven from the statement made about his parentage, as his father was wise and resourceful and his mother was not wise and not resourceful logically leaving him, the child result, somewhere in the middle. Plato likely included some of his personal insight to this section of the Symposium as he is seemingly using an analogy of the divided line. As it is said that Socrates believed in the division between wisdom and ignorance, this thought can logically be connected to Plato’s belief in the division between lower and higher states of being and lower and higher states of knowing. In order to truly understand and be completely wise or completely ignorant, one must be able to identify a solid form for that idea. This is nearly impossible, as it is impossible to completely identify oneself with a low or high state of knowledge or being because of the lack of any form connected to those ideas
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Similarly related to the idea of the divided line is an idea that can bridge the gap between ignorance and wisdom; this idea of scala amoris. Scala amoris can be recognized as the dynamic force that takes one from ignorance to wisdom; more simply stated this idea can be seen as the stairs of love. This theory consists of the idea that two lovers ascend in life together working with one another to make the other better and stronger. The goal of the lovers is to work from the basis of ignorance, as newly formed couples are very ignorant to one another and have so much room for learning, and eventually find, in the perfect situation, complete wisdom and knowledge in and about one another. It takes hardships, questioning, and much time for a couple to work with one another and reach the top of the staircase, figuratively speaking. Within the idea of scala amoris lies two types of ascent that help a couple reach eternal wisdom; one being moral ascent and the other being metaphysical ascent. Moral ascent is necessary for a couple to grow as the pair must agree upon and understand each others ethical standpoints in order to solve problems without disagreement. Additionally, metaphysical ascent is necessary because the more basic of questions about life a couple can agree upon, the less disagreement they will reach when trying to answer larger questions simply because of the fact that every large questions eventually boils down to the most basic questions of life.
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Socrates also says that love, the lover of beautiful things, has desires; simply that love desires to be beautiful and wise and good. It is commonly known that if something is desired, that means that it is wanted and not yet obtained by the thing that wants the desired object. According to Socrates, love therefore cannot be beautiful or completely wise or wholly good because it desires to be those things. This, according to Socrates, was one of the largest realizations that Diotima helped him to understand. Accordingly, Socrates mentions that the main point is this: “Every desire for good things or for happiness is ‘the supreme and treacherous love’ in everyone” (51). The problem with identifying lovers is that they come in many forms, and it’s hard to say who is a true lover and what qualifies one as truly being in love. In response to this, Socrates says, “it’s only when people are devoted exclusively to one special kind of love that we use these words that really belong to the whole of it: ‘love’ and ‘in love’ and ‘lovers’” (51).
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Continuing, Socrates expresses his belief in love as immortal. He states that love wants “reproduction and birth in beauty… because reproduction goes on forever; it is what mortals have in place of immortality” (53-54). In understanding this, reproduction is an immortal thing for mortal people to do because immortality bust be desired with good, as believed by Socrates. Assuming that love wants so have the good forever, it logically follows that love must want immortality as well, as immortality and good coincide. In trying to explain how mortals are immortal through reproduction, I assume that is it because when one dies another is reborn, and, ideally, the process should repeat itself meaning that the essence of one being will keep being carried on through a series of lives and never die; essentially, this could mean that a being always exists somewhere between the Gods and the dirt. Some essence of each being should ideally be carried on through the spirit of another whether alive, in heaven, or in hell. Socrates defends his position in saying that, “I believe that anyone will do anything for the sake of immortal virtue and the glorious fame that follows; and the better the people, the more they will do, for they are all in love with immortality” (56).
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In summary, Socrates believes that, in the most simple of explanations, love is broader than just the term we use; love is broader than the desire to possess the good. If love desires every that is good, and ultimately everything that is good creates happiness, then therefore the conclusion must be that to truly be in love is to be truly happy. Socrates’ ability to understand what is good takes him out of present day; he leaves the stresses and drawbacks of love behind and lives for what he thinks will ultimately find him happiness, happiness that is love.
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Personally, my biggest feeling on love is that it can only truly be found and known in the eye of the beholder. This view would probably upset Socrates, as he believes that there is an ultimate understanding to what love is, but I don’t know if something so directly tied to the emotions one feels on the inside that is, more often than not, unexplainable by the lover, can be generalized for a group and applied to every person experiencing love. 
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I agree with Socrates on a few accounts. Most strongly I agree with him on the idea of love lying somewhere in between ignorance and wisdom. In complete agreement, I think that couples definitely face the scala amoris, or the staircase of love, and together must grow and help each other reach the top. All couples start out innocent and young, ignorant in their intentions and unaware of what they will face together. But, as the couple ages together, they learn from their own mistakes and the mistakes of one another and continually grow. It takes a strong couple to be able to understand their weaknesses and be honest with one another so all real truths can be found. I believe that it is with every honest answer and realization about one another that a couple grows strong and, thus, takes another step up the staircase. I also understand Socrates’ point in saying that to be in love is to be happy. I would strongly disagree with any couple who could say that they were in love but not truly happy, as I personally believe that true happiness is the key to a successful life.
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As I agree with Socrates on a few arguments, there are others that I do not agree with him on as well. Mainly, I disagree with Socrates on his idea of love being immortal. Personally, I think that we can only apply our knowledge of love within the span of the lifetime we live, because really it’s all we’ve got. I think it would be hard to say that the love I feel will be carried on through my children and, furthermore, my grandchildren and those who follow them. I think it is most simple to understand love within the context we coherently know, being our experiences first hand, and that is only possible if we examine it at the time were living and breathing. The other area of disagreement I hold with Socrates is in his idea of the forms being attached to certain words. In this, I’m addressing Socrates’ theory that a form or object must be connected to a certain word, and if one can identify that form then, and only then, are they completely wise or completely ignorant. I think that this idea is a little far fetched and hard for the common reader to identify with because it’s very hard to understand; at least it was for me. Personally, I find love slightly more subjective than Socrates or Plato would think of it.
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In Plato’s poetic piece, Symposium, Socrates’ views on love are expressed and elaborated on in full, and while very interesting to read about, I find myself in disagreement with major parts of his argument. Every person experiences love at a different level and tries to make sense of the complicated phenomena. I respect the arguments of Socrates immensely as it is clear that much thought was put into his work, though, furthermore, I respect the work of Plato in collecting six different views that leave the reader with more than enough room for thought and personal interpretation. The opinions given by the six philosophers differ so greatly that a reader can distinguish which opinions they agree with and disagree with easily; at least that’s what I found in reading these stories. The stories of the Symposium, especially the expression of Socrates’ view, leaves me still wondering what love truly is, where it comes from, and why in the world it is so hard to find and identify.
  
 
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1st Critical Analysis Papers

A Discussion on Love

What is love, really? How can it be defined; and, on that note, who has the role of defining it? Is it real? If so, what is real? These are all questions that logically follow in asking the question, “What is love?” Plato, one of the most infamous philosophers of all time, collected and reiterated the opinions on love of six ancient philosophical icons that discussed the subject sometime between 406 and 400 B.C. In Plato’s collection, titled Symposium, the definition of love is eventually expressed by Socrates, he who seen to be more than a normal human, he who is divine in the flesh. Though the story is written by Plato and likely altered slightly according to his personal prospective on love, the essence of Socrates’ opinion is captured and expressed in the Symposium, Plato’s poetic masterpiece. Socrates’ beliefs in love are said to be formulated from a discussion he once had with Diotima, an extremely wise and philosophical woman of Mantinea who served as a tutor to Socrates. He begins his reasoning in stating that prior to discussing love with Diotima, he believed, “that love is a great god and that he belongs to beautiful things” (45). What he shortly came to find in his enlightening discussion was that love was actually neither beautiful nor good; that, at its origin, love was poor and homeless. According to Socrates, love is the child of Poros, meaning resource, and Penia, meaning poverty. Additionally, “Love is never completely without resources, nor is he ever rich” (49). Socrates believes that love falls somewhere in between wisdom and ignorance as well because of the fact that love is in love with what is beautiful, and wisdom is one of the finest beauties. This can also be proven from the statement made about his parentage, as his father was wise and resourceful and his mother was not wise and not resourceful logically leaving him, the child result, somewhere in the middle. Plato likely included some of his personal insight to this section of the Symposium as he is seemingly using an analogy of the divided line. As it is said that Socrates believed in the division between wisdom and ignorance, this thought can logically be connected to Plato’s belief in the division between lower and higher states of being and lower and higher states of knowing. In order to truly understand and be completely wise or completely ignorant, one must be able to identify a solid form for that idea. This is nearly impossible, as it is impossible to completely identify oneself with a low or high state of knowledge or being because of the lack of any form connected to those ideas Similarly related to the idea of the divided line is an idea that can bridge the gap between ignorance and wisdom; this idea of scala amoris. Scala amoris can be recognized as the dynamic force that takes one from ignorance to wisdom; more simply stated this idea can be seen as the stairs of love. This theory consists of the idea that two lovers ascend in life together working with one another to make the other better and stronger. The goal of the lovers is to work from the basis of ignorance, as newly formed couples are very ignorant to one another and have so much room for learning, and eventually find, in the perfect situation, complete wisdom and knowledge in and about one another. It takes hardships, questioning, and much time for a couple to work with one another and reach the top of the staircase, figuratively speaking. Within the idea of scala amoris lies two types of ascent that help a couple reach eternal wisdom; one being moral ascent and the other being metaphysical ascent. Moral ascent is necessary for a couple to grow as the pair must agree upon and understand each others ethical standpoints in order to solve problems without disagreement. Additionally, metaphysical ascent is necessary because the more basic of questions about life a couple can agree upon, the less disagreement they will reach when trying to answer larger questions simply because of the fact that every large questions eventually boils down to the most basic questions of life. Socrates also says that love, the lover of beautiful things, has desires; simply that love desires to be beautiful and wise and good. It is commonly known that if something is desired, that means that it is wanted and not yet obtained by the thing that wants the desired object. According to Socrates, love therefore cannot be beautiful or completely wise or wholly good because it desires to be those things. This, according to Socrates, was one of the largest realizations that Diotima helped him to understand. Accordingly, Socrates mentions that the main point is this: “Every desire for good things or for happiness is ‘the supreme and treacherous love’ in everyone” (51). The problem with identifying lovers is that they come in many forms, and it’s hard to say who is a true lover and what qualifies one as truly being in love. In response to this, Socrates says, “it’s only when people are devoted exclusively to one special kind of love that we use these words that really belong to the whole of it: ‘love’ and ‘in love’ and ‘lovers’” (51). Continuing, Socrates expresses his belief in love as immortal. He states that love wants “reproduction and birth in beauty… because reproduction goes on forever; it is what mortals have in place of immortality” (53-54). In understanding this, reproduction is an immortal thing for mortal people to do because immortality bust be desired with good, as believed by Socrates. Assuming that love wants so have the good forever, it logically follows that love must want immortality as well, as immortality and good coincide. In trying to explain how mortals are immortal through reproduction, I assume that is it because when one dies another is reborn, and, ideally, the process should repeat itself meaning that the essence of one being will keep being carried on through a series of lives and never die; essentially, this could mean that a being always exists somewhere between the Gods and the dirt. Some essence of each being should ideally be carried on through the spirit of another whether alive, in heaven, or in hell. Socrates defends his position in saying that, “I believe that anyone will do anything for the sake of immortal virtue and the glorious fame that follows; and the better the people, the more they will do, for they are all in love with immortality” (56). In summary, Socrates believes that, in the most simple of explanations, love is broader than just the term we use; love is broader than the desire to possess the good. If love desires every that is good, and ultimately everything that is good creates happiness, then therefore the conclusion must be that to truly be in love is to be truly happy. Socrates’ ability to understand what is good takes him out of present day; he leaves the stresses and drawbacks of love behind and lives for what he thinks will ultimately find him happiness, happiness that is love. Personally, my biggest feeling on love is that it can only truly be found and known in the eye of the beholder. This view would probably upset Socrates, as he believes that there is an ultimate understanding to what love is, but I don’t know if something so directly tied to the emotions one feels on the inside that is, more often than not, unexplainable by the lover, can be generalized for a group and applied to every person experiencing love. I agree with Socrates on a few accounts. Most strongly I agree with him on the idea of love lying somewhere in between ignorance and wisdom. In complete agreement, I think that couples definitely face the scala amoris, or the staircase of love, and together must grow and help each other reach the top. All couples start out innocent and young, ignorant in their intentions and unaware of what they will face together. But, as the couple ages together, they learn from their own mistakes and the mistakes of one another and continually grow. It takes a strong couple to be able to understand their weaknesses and be honest with one another so all real truths can be found. I believe that it is with every honest answer and realization about one another that a couple grows strong and, thus, takes another step up the staircase. I also understand Socrates’ point in saying that to be in love is to be happy. I would strongly disagree with any couple who could say that they were in love but not truly happy, as I personally believe that true happiness is the key to a successful life. As I agree with Socrates on a few arguments, there are others that I do not agree with him on as well. Mainly, I disagree with Socrates on his idea of love being immortal. Personally, I think that we can only apply our knowledge of love within the span of the lifetime we live, because really it’s all we’ve got. I think it would be hard to say that the love I feel will be carried on through my children and, furthermore, my grandchildren and those who follow them. I think it is most simple to understand love within the context we coherently know, being our experiences first hand, and that is only possible if we examine it at the time were living and breathing. The other area of disagreement I hold with Socrates is in his idea of the forms being attached to certain words. In this, I’m addressing Socrates’ theory that a form or object must be connected to a certain word, and if one can identify that form then, and only then, are they completely wise or completely ignorant. I think that this idea is a little far fetched and hard for the common reader to identify with because it’s very hard to understand; at least it was for me. Personally, I find love slightly more subjective than Socrates or Plato would think of it. In Plato’s poetic piece, Symposium, Socrates’ views on love are expressed and elaborated on in full, and while very interesting to read about, I find myself in disagreement with major parts of his argument. Every person experiences love at a different level and tries to make sense of the complicated phenomena. I respect the arguments of Socrates immensely as it is clear that much thought was put into his work, though, furthermore, I respect the work of Plato in collecting six different views that leave the reader with more than enough room for thought and personal interpretation. The opinions given by the six philosophers differ so greatly that a reader can distinguish which opinions they agree with and disagree with easily; at least that’s what I found in reading these stories. The stories of the Symposium, especially the expression of Socrates’ view, leaves me still wondering what love truly is, where it comes from, and why in the world it is so hard to find and identify.


Love As a State of Improvement

In Symposium, Plato presents a variety of perspectives on the definition of love. He presents his view through Socrates, who believes that love is a means to wisdom and that true lovers prod one another to fulfill their intellectual potential. I agree that love is about constant improvement to become a better version of oneself, but do not believe that in loving, one desires nobility or immortality. Rather, one who loves another seeks to become a better person through their relationship with them.

To express his view of love, Socrates relates an encounter with the wise woman Diotima. She tells the story of Love the god, whose parents were Poverty and Resource. Thus, he always lives in need, but seeks the good. In order to explain that without constant desire for work and improvement, then love dies, she says, “He is by nature neither immortal nor mortal. But now he springs to life when he gets his way; now he dies—all in the very same day” (203E). This means that love yearns for beauty, and springs to life when he gets, but that the quest ends. Since to desire wisdom, one must know that they have much to learn, and are therefore ignorant, love is in between ignorance and wisdom (204B). Ultimately, lovers aim to attain happiness, for the acquisition of good and beautiful things logically leads to happiness (205A). By this definition, those who desire wealth, power, fame, success, sports, or anything else are also in love, but not the particular type of love in which the word typically refers to, when one is “in love” (205D).

Diotima continues to explain that love is “giving birth in beauty,” which I find a little hard to swallow. Certainly lovers draw out of each other the highest level of thinking and conduct, but I do not believe this is to achieve immortality, for not everyone wants to live forever. One might say that reproduction is nature’s way to ensure immortality, but I believe we are simply programmed to continue the species. In loving another, we crave improvement so we may create the healthiest, most competitive child possible. Since many humans do not have to worry about survival, they desire a mate with intellectual capacity. Also, what must not be lost is our desire to spend time with this lover in the moment, for seeking wisdom has little to do with immortality and everything to do with participating in the highest form of cerebral activity known to man. When someone falls in love, they do not consider living forever, but rather how they may make the most of their time to live. Diotima’s final point is that one starts out appreciating the beauty of a body, then realizes that all bodies possess beauty, and finally understands that souls are more beautiful than bodies (210B). Though my theory of love corroborates the notion of love as desire, there are many details of Socrates’ definition upon which I differ.

Eryximachus states that “dissimilar subjects desire and love objects that are themselves dissimilar” (186B). His assertion that love is part of a broader phenomenon makes sense scientifically, but is only the most fundamental layer of human love. An analogy can be made between atoms and humans. An atom is attracted to, and thus bonds, with another atom that lacks the number or electrons it has in excess and vice versa. These two atoms share these electrons between them so that each one has its desired number. So as in human love, the individuals complete each other. However, this is not love, for once the atoms bond, they are both content, whereas in human love, neither is ever content because each continually seeks to acquire wisdom. Thus, Erixymachus has the right idea that many forces in nature connect and balance two opposites, as human love does, but he fails to see that the distinguishing trait of love is the perpetual desire for good and for wisdom, as Socrates points out when he questions Agathon.

In my opinion, human love is based on an innate, physical desire to reproduce, but reaches a higher level of connection and understanding with the ultimate goal of attaining wisdom. As animals derived from a long line of ancestral species, humans want to find the most suitable mate possible in order to create vital offspring. Nature has programmed each of us to find that ideal mate, by how they look, how they carry themselves, and how they perform different tasks. Studies have shown that humans and other animals often become attracted to another individual based on the compatibility of their pheromones, or chemical signals that indicate information about an individual’s genetic makeup. Thus, much of physical attraction occurs on a subconscious level. Though our animal tendencies underlie much of our actions, they comprise only the most fundamental level of attraction.

Human love is infinitely more complicated than the purely physical “love” sought by a fish or a deer. Pausanias claims that two loves—Common and Heavenly—exist (180E). A Common Lover, he says, “only cares about completing the sexual act,” while a Heavenly Lover is “prepared to share everything with the one he loves” (181B-D). I believe that the true definition of human love is the combination of the two—based on the physical, but evolved to an intellectual and emotional exercise. Diotima’s final point—that we start out loving the physical and progress to loving the soul—supports this. We seek those who can help us become the best versions of ourselves. We desire those who will push us to attain qualities that we lack. This attraction to people who “complete us,” as Aristophanes would say, probably has its roots in our drive to produce competitive offspring with as many positive qualities as possible. Ultimately, though, lovers must always continue their quest for mutual improvement, in character and in wisdom.

The highest, most ideal form of love consists of a connection between two people who effectively work as team members in the pursuit of wisdom by discussing ideas and sharing experiences. This person may not be a life partner; in fact, one may have many lovers throughout their life. In the book, Eat, Pray, Love, author Elizabeth Gilbert defines a soul mate as “a mirror, the person who shows you everything that’s holding you back, the person who brings you to your own attention so you can change your life...they come into your life to reveal another layer of yourself to you, and then they leave.” Thus, lovers seek pleasure in the present and may move from one lover to the next each time their love dies. Though a person may stay with a lover forever, they just as easily may not, since love aims for improvement until none can be made, when it dies as Diotima explains (203E).

Unrequited love can have similar effects on the lover, but can never attain the wisdom and self-knowledge that comes from a loving relationship that is completely mutual. One-way love can motivate one to act noble and virtuous in order to impress, but true love involves the perpetual desire to attain wisdom, which must be done through constant discussion and interaction with the lover. Phaedrus’ definition says that men exhibit the most honor and virtue when in love. He claims that lovers want their beloved to see them in the best possible light, and that motivates them to garner glory. However, Phaedrus just scratches the surface of what love motivates one to attain. In its ideal form, love desires wisdom and intellectual improvement, not simply virtue, for with his conscience, a person innately knows the difference between right and wrong. In contrast, humans are not born wise, but become wise through interaction and reflection with others, namely, the beloved. We know on our own whether or not an action is moral, but the person we love gives us new ideas and helps us see situations from new perspectives that did not previously exist within us. Thus, love is even greater than Phaedrus claims, for it broadens the scope of our minds and requires investment by two parties.

It is possible that one party loves more than the other. Though not ideal, unbalanced lovers may still intellectually stimulate one another but only to the extent to which the lesser lover reaches. The stronger and more equal the attraction, the more benefit both will get because they will be able to ignite one another’s best theories. The highest compatibility in conversation and in actions, when each molds and shapes the other into the most enlightened person possible defines the greatest love. Again, if this enlightenment is ever attained, the two parties cannot be in love anymore.

The love I have described thus far must be distinguished from forced love, such as arranged marriages, in which two people are forced to mate for life. In ideal love, a person seeks another with whom they have a special chemistry and compatibility to become the best person possible. In arranged marriage, the only form of love possible is that found between siblings, the type of love that comes out of attachment to the constant. Siblings love each other because a history of shared experiences has driven them to form a unique bond. The same phenomenon must occur through arranged marriage.

Plato was right that love is the desire for wisdom and betterment, based on physical attraction. However, I do not believe it is part of a larger quest for immortality, but instead a way to make the most of the time one has. Love manifests bits and pieces of itself in many ways, but in its ideal state, lovers complement each other in such a way that they ignite powerful mutual improvement. Two people may love each other for a length of time, but this ends once the two parties halt their guidance of each other. To find wisdom, one must chase a higher level of consciousness, and through love, one unites with another to catalyze this path to new awareness.

1st Philosophical Analysis Paper - Alfino's comments

I thought this was a good batch of papers and that most of you are demonstrating the kind of philosophical activity that it is the goal of the course to develop. From this starting point, I think you are in a great position to make some progress in your philosophical skills and theory building over the semester. Here are a couple of comments based on your first paper:

  1. Pay more attention to "implications" and "entailments". When someone makes a claim, and certainly when they present a whole theory, there are often implications -- additional claims that follow logically from the earlier claims. Similarly, if, in believing some claim P, you must also believe Q, we would say that "P entails Q". You should track implications and entailments more carefully.
  2. Before rejecting a view because of some strong claim (such as "People have kids because they want to be immortal.") try out some interpretations of the claim (less literal, for example). Also, try a weaker version of the claim (maybe, for example, "People want to be remembered").
  3. Summarize less, reconstruction more. Don't present a philosophical view as a set of disconnected claims or opinions on various topics. Look for the most basic claims (premises and conclusions) that constitute the view and show how that are related logically.
  4. Avoid simple relativism. Does the claim that there is tremendous subjective and cultural variability in something entail that it has no reality?
  5. Don't forget everything you learned in Comp class. Theses, a roadmap, well-formed paragraphs, clear language. Take care of your reader!
  6. Don't forget everything you learned in Critical Thinking. Arguments, explanations. Let the positions speak!

Participation Journals

I periodically encourage students to post journal entries that seem particularly successful. Below you will find a sample of these journals. If I asked you to post your work, please paste it in, using the template below. You can copy and paste the section below to create your own space. Then past your text in to the new section.


Template: Participation Journal Title

Copy this section format and fill in the journal title with the specific title of your journal. Then paste your text in place of these two sentences.

Participation Journal: The Value of Philosophy

Philosophy aims at the kind of knowledge that gives unity to the sciences. Philosophy, as opposed to science, has not produced many definite answers to questions. If something becomes known for sure, it is classified and further studied as a science. Even if philosophy has played a key role in the realization of these facts, as it did in the early studies of the heavens or the mind, it will no longer be a part of their study once they can be classified as a science. Philosophic thinking has helped shape the sciences and continues to do so, acting as a sort of glue bringing them all together, but it is in the study of those questions which have no definite answer where philosophy’s true knowledge comes. This knowledge comes from questioning those aspects of the universe which we can never fully know to be true or not. These type of questions breed speculation that broadens the mind in ways that definitely ascertainable knowledge cannot. If we sit idly by in life and allow it to pass us by, accepting the “normal” as such and not examining things beyond their base level, we are missing out on the truly intimate relationship with the universe that is attainable through philosophical thought. This relationship is at the core of perhaps philosophy’s greatest value, the greatness of the objects it contemplates and the freedom from aims of self-interest that this method of contemplation brings. By putting great value and interest in all aspects of the outside world and their place in this world, we can move from viewing the world as it affects and relates to us to viewing the world purely as it is. In order to move beyond these self-motivated ways of thinking, we must free ourselves from our innate desires for what is comforting and usual. It is hard to step outside the confines of our ways of thinking that have been engrained into us by society, but if this can be accomplished, with time, we can begin to truly understand the outside world. I would say that many do not make an attempt to abandon their old ways of thinking out of the fear of the unknown. Philosophy, in essence, resides in the unknown and, for many people, this is extremely discomforting. People, in general, like to know for certain why things are the way they are and how these things affect them. The interesting thing about philosophy is that the Self will indeed be bettered through philosophical thought, but this self-betterment cannot be sought. We must seek knowledge in and of itself, and that knowledge must regard things outside of ourselves. If we view the universe with pure objectivity, we will learn things about it we could have never known while observing it through the blurry lens of self-interest. We will, however, form questions that seem to have no answer. But that questioning, whether it produces an answer for us or not, will gain us wisdom and a still deeper connection with our universe. We simply have to be willing to embrace this uncertainty and see it as a gift and not a curse, for wisdom gained always betters the mind and soul. I saw this wisdom gained just the other day in class when we were talking about what is “real” in our groups. No one appeared to have any stunning revelations, or if so they were not voiced, but I could certainly see people gaining wisdom from one another by listening to their thoughts on what is real. Most people in our group conceded that something is real if you can touch it and dismissed the idea brought up earlier in class that physical objects are not real because they will not be here forever. These were pretty much my thoughts, along with a belief that one’s ideas are real as well, but it was just interesting to observe the level of agreement that we all shared on the topic. It is a very loaded question, with innumerable possible answers, and yet we pretty much came up with a definition in the course of a five-minute discussion. I believe that people do not actually engage in much philosophical thought in their day-to-day lives, unless of course they are in a setting such as a philosophy class where philosophical thought and discussion are encouraged. I have conversations with friends often about the state of the world, but I don’t know if I would describe them as philosophical in nature. Discussing politics, for instance, relates to the world and its state but its aim is not to become more in touch with the universe, but rather to voice one’s own opinions on people, issues, and ideals. I would say ideals can be shaped from philosophical thought, but these thoughts that form them center more around the nature of the world, not its citizens’ opinions on how it should be run. My opinion on how much people actually engage in philosophical thought is simply based on my observations, and it is an opinion that I hope is incorrect because I believe there are many advantages to philosophical reflection. Besides the obvious wisdom that can be gained from true philosophical reflection, I would say the biggest advantage is that it frees us from the mundane and makes us realize that there is far more to the universe than what we observe on the surface. The universe is full of intangible elements that cannot be seen or discovered without letting go of our own self-interests and exploring that which is not known to be true.